Sara Bellum (sbeetle) wrote,
Sara Bellum
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Urge to kill rising...

Okay, I've been fixing this person's crap for going on a month now. I am sick and tired of reading his spewage. I've read Russian novels with less words. Actually, Crime and Punnishment would be an accurate description for what I'm feeling right now. So far, I've taken his chapters and cut them by at least 10 pages. One chapter I've cut in half. What takes him three paragraphs, I can do in one sentence. It's terrible.

The funny thing is that my boss says that this guy was a journalist before he was a tech writer. Last I checked, that meant you wrote with some sort of clarity. Not this bonehead. ARGH.
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